HOW TO CREATE MORALLY GREY CHARACTERS IN NOVELS (BASIC)
- WGSS Libr@ry
- Mar 11
- 2 min read
Updated: Mar 12
Allow mistakes
To create a truly morally grey character, you must build them heavily on mistakes. Their reasons may not always be justified, which is why it's important to allow emotionally, physically, etc. faults in scenes.
EXAMPLE ✖;
Derek is the protagonist in novel one. He has never made any mistakes, brought the plot to victory through good means, and was overall a standup guy.
While this is perfectly alright to do for other characters, he doesn't exactly seem to be in any type of "grey" area. At least none that stand out.
EXAMPLE ✔;
Jane is the protagonist in novel two. She drives the plot along as well, but during her journey she sacrificed things / people for her own gain. She still brought justice for the good of a cause, but also committed bad acts to get to that point.
Scenarios like this allow a more in-depth, but also grey character. It highlights the importance of their beliefs while also driving along the plot and delivering moral divisions between their mind and the readers.
Avoid cliche's
Part of the fun about writing these types of characters is exploring their inner turmoil. While a classic "misunderstood villain" is always fun, giving your character deeper goals and ambitions that they'll go to large lengths to succeed.
The desperation of a character will show the importance of their goals to the reader. It also makes for a complicated character vs. self between their morals and ambitions.
Read about OTHER morally grey characters for inspiration. If you don't read it yourself, how can you expect to do better?
Some books to try... (highlighted the ones I'd recommend the most.)
Iron Widow by Xiran Jay Zhao
And I Darken by Kiersten White
All of Us Villains by Amanda Foody
Shadows Between Us by Tricia Levenseller
Little Thieves by Margaret Owen
The Cruel Prince by Holly Black
Only a Monster by Vanessa Len
Renegades by Marissa Meyer
Vicious by V. E. Schwab
Forest of a Thousand Lanterns by Julie C. Dao
Six of Crows by Leigh Bardugo
FYI
Some of these I haven't read myself, please do your own research to see if they interest you.
Characters built on a foundation of mistakes - I think the idea is a well-described concept in designing a facinating character. I can imagine a reverse engineered character like this for role-playing games like D&D - make the flawed character first then just pencil in the stats that best reflect those flaws...
Moreover, if you are a writer stuck without a decent plot, this is where character driven story-telling thrives. The creation of a "charcter built on mistakes" has in their design a back-story with tendrils of potential motivation. I cam imagine putting a couple of these types of characters together like ingredients in a soup to see what story flavour comes out of it.
That said, can an author…